Looks good for the first draft. Those two shots of you look off. Avoid shooting from a low angle because your sky blows out the shot a little. Also you need to shoot on a day that matches the sunny weather you had for the rest of the shots. Dad's 2nd to the last shot is also low in audio. Shots otherwise look solid though. Nice job! Title does need to be fixed. Doesn't make sense as it's written now. Keep working!
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