You've done a pretty good job here presenting the issue at hand. But what you needed to do better was to establish why we went into this new schedule. The school didn't do this on it's own. We had to comply with a new state law that went into effect this school year. It would have been better for you to briefly touch on that and use Mr. Godsill to explain the non-teaching period that CKMS added. That would explain the reasons behind the change to begin with. Then use Kevin and Mrs. Finlay to explain their thoughts on if it works or not. You also can't delete all of your audio in your b-roll shots. We don't want the audio full blast which takes away from your interview, but we still need to hear it so we still feel connected to the story. By deleting all of your audio, we lose that connection. If a subject also looks into your camera a lot like Mr. Godsill, you need to stop the interview and correct it. Watch your backgrounds too because the one for Mrs. Finlay is horrible. Your standups cut off your head and your camera needs to be at your eye level. That will make it more of a medium shot. Let's make these changes for the next project and do even better. I'd give this an overall grade of B+. It was nicely done but could use some improvements. Your story needs to flow better.
I am a 7th Grade, 2d year Media Student for CKTV.