Audio - Most of your audio is good. You do need to have more b-roll audio in your shots as some are really soft. At least one of the VOs has an echo and is really soft. Tristen needs to slow down in his speaking. I had a hard time figuring out what he said in the beginning at the start and had to refer to your script to figure out what he was saying. His closing audio is also really bad and needs to be redone. Audio overall is good but not great so I'd give it a B.
Visuals - Your interviews are pretty good but Emily's has some dirt on the lens which created that white spot on the left side. Janis's isn't bad but needs to tighter. Gabriel's is framed incorrectly as he's looking off to the left instead of the right. Vladimir looks up as he answers his questions which means that you guys were standing while he was sitting. Remember that you need to be at the same level as he is when conducting an interview. In fact, most look up. Your b-roll is pretty good although some shots are too light because it was bright in the background. The video as it's cut right now doesn't flow. Your points seems to jump or some aren't fully developed before you go into the next one. In looking at your script, your script flows much better than the video does and it looks like you realized that leaving all of those parts in it would extend you beyond the 3 minute time limit so you trimmed. The problem was that you trimmed the wrong parts and now you have a piece that doesn't flow. This needs some editing to get it to a place where it can fully be appreciated. I think you have a nice story here and I commend you for getting all of that information about this program but this needs work. I'm tempted to give this a C+ but based on your script, I'm going to give you a B-.
I am a 7th Grade, 2d year Media Student for CKTV.