4th Quarter TIAS & Script

3/15/2016

Mr. M

4/6/2016 04:03:12 pm

I love the overall idea behind this but is this a movie trailer or a short film? Because this is nothing like a movie trailer. It's more along the lines of a short film. It starts off like it is a movie trailer where you see that this is from the creator of "Expectation vs. Reality" but the script flows like a short film. Movie trailers give you bits and pieces, just enough to make you want to come back and watch the whole thing. You are giving me everything up until where you end with the reporter talking to a super hero. What happens next? Do they succeed in creating this Supervillain that can beat the security thing? Does their plan work or does it backfire somehow like most plans do?

I think your idea is great but you need to go back and decide what this is going to be, a movie trailer or a short film. You can go either way here but they are vastly different.

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