I really like how it's moving this character throughout his day. To me this is much more story-like instead of just doing separate things that are just thrown together with no real purpose. Great job! The only thing I can suggest is how you end it. Shouldn't it end with "reality" instead of "expectation"? He wakes up and realizes it's his life that he dreamed about. He hears the mom yelling, his alarm clock is ringing, and he realizes it's his "reality."
Write something about yourself. No need to be fancy, just an overview.