I'm glad you convinced me to let you do this type of video because I think it came out pretty good! It was entertaining and funny at times. Your shots were solid and you used sound effects really well. They really added a nice touch to your video. Sound is 50%! However I do think this video was too long. Your skits were good in how they were like a day in the life of a teen but each part was too long. These kinds of things need to be short and to the point. If you were to go back and redo this, trimming each section down to as short as possible would really move it along. Be careful with titles too. VS. has a period at the end of S, not in the middle of V and S. You also are lacking nat sounds in your clips. When you grab the refrig to open it, I should hear what that sounds like. I don't hear anything in that sequence and in many of your shots. While you used music and sound effects well, you forgot all about using nat sounds. Ending was good. Overall I'm giving this a 3.7 or a A-
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