Wow, Ben, I think this looks fantastic! What a great message! I do have a few things I want you to look at. The sound you have when the Twitter logo comes up is the sound for a text message. See if you can find a different sound for that. Also, I really like how you twist the phone icon to sort of match the phone call ringer, but I can see a faint box surrounding the icon. Is there a way to get rid of that? One last thing....I'd like you to try and speak the last title as a voiceover to play at the end. Try a version with that and let's see how that works. Well done!
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