Holy smokes! What happened to the 30 second PSA? I haven't counted your seconds but it's way longer than 30 seconds. PSAs are short and 30 seconds is your time limit. Can you look this over again and see what you can do to trim your clips so that you can reach the 30 sec limit? You know that I think it's a great idea...it just needs to be shortened. 3 points out of 4
Ok, now that you've explained that your shot list is different from what we're used to, this is ok to film. 4 points.
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