It's too bad that you had those 2 shots of you that were overexposed the first time you did this. Even though you filmed them again you could still tell they were noticeably different in terms of the colors and lighting. You had a few minor problems with your audio but I feel your message was pretty clear. When scored this came out to a 3.4 but I'm going to bump this up to a 3.6 which makes your grade move up from a B+ to an A- because you went back out there and tried to improve it. It didn't work as well as we wanted it to but you tried and your message was clear. No one wants to smoke when you see all the stuff in a cigarette. I have one question for you though....is that rabbit food you used for the rat poison???
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