T.I.A.S

10/22/2015

MR. M

1/10/2016 11:58:14 pm

Looks good! 4 points out of 4.

Where is your script?

Mr M

1/11/2016 01:14:51 am

Since you don't have a script posted, I'm posting my comments about it here.

This was a tough story to do as this new farm definitely has its supporters and detractors. In looking at the transcripts, you had a lot of info to go on and I'm sure it wasn't easy to pull some of the best sound bites from it. I really like your first four points of this script and how you were able to show both sides to the issue. I think your weakest point is your last point. The VO for it could be better worded and I think you need maybe another sound bite from someone else to support it. Your closing could use some work as well as all you need to say is that the farm has faced some opposition but is working to address the concerns. Overall though I think you did a nice job in showing the two sides to this issue. This is a 3.7 or an A-. Nice job!

T.I.A.S

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